PART 1 There once lived a girl she was only 7 years old,she lived with her father and her mother then her father passed away because of cancer. When her dad passed away because of cancer her life changed heaps,she wasn’t use to her mother because her mother goes to work and comes back home at 11pm at night and she never spends time with her and they never get along. When she turned 8 her dad said that he will make the bestest birthday for her but when he passed away her wish didn’t come true. 2 years after she was 10 she went to school and she didn’t have any friends,there was one day she was sitting there eating her lunch when this girl came up to her. They started being best friends and one day her best friend came over and asked her if she could play one day and her mother said no because she had to finish off her homework. She didn’t like it that her mum stops her from going to play with her friends she said to her mum in a loud voice “IF DAD WAS HERE I COULD DO WHATEVER I ...
That is one great Advice you have written there, and your Advice back to Kat is fantastic. I like they way that you speak in a kind voice and giving a perfect Advice to each other. That is one heroic Advice that you have written there, and the way you use comers, Capital letters and full stops. Have a lovely day with your friends, and may God bless you and your family, never stop learning keep on going and you will succeed.
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